ext_186248 ([identity profile] morgulq.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zhie 2006-05-05 11:44 am (UTC)

That's awesome!

Slight nitpick, though...

Quite unexpectedly Chryses, a Trojan priest
Paid a ransom to have his captured daughter released
So Menelaus let her go and took Briseis instead
Who was formerly warming young Achilles’ bed


Refusing now to fight in the war
Achilles was disgraced and rather sore
For not only did Menelaus take away his prize
But he also helped when Iphigenia had been sacrificed

It was Agamemnon, not Menelaos. Love how he dies (Agamemnon, that is)

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