ext_210138 ([identity profile] lalaith-raina.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zhie 2008-12-01 07:28 am (UTC)

Whoa! Surprise ending there!

This was absolutely lovely.

I was so happy to read Erestor's reasonings for his behaviors - boy made me want to smack him upside the head all the times he would mention Galadriel or pine for her or flirt with ladies. I couldn't understand how he wasn't appreciating Fin who was right in front of him and utterly devoted to him.
I also smiled when he admitted he knew it was Fin all those years ago in Gondolin. I'd suspected he knew, but wondered if he would ever share it.

I love Glorfindel for being so accepting and good to Erestor. Those two really are made for each other, and I adore how you write them. I like, though, that there's still a bit of frustration on Fin's side. Very nicely done.

Go on, Ress. Let Fin cuddle you in public. You know you want to.
:3

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