ext_210138 ([identity profile] lalaith-raina.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zhie 2009-03-25 07:20 am (UTC)

Awwww, a lovely little collection of shorts. :3
... I think I still owe you a comment on Silver & Gold, too. >> Sorry about that. I'll comment some time. Really I will. May be a year or so. But eventually.

I love (surprise, surprise) the little Erestor/Glorfindel bit. Very fluffy and sweet, and for some reason I really enjoy when you put your Erestor in a position where he's uncertain and kind of timid. I love the devotion Fin has to him, and how Erestor shows the same love but in a more quiet manner. I'm always envious how your characters are all individuals, while I often feel like mine act very similar.

Exculpation is really cool, and I enjoyed it when I spotted it before, too. This, I'm assuming, is like... after he's reborn, yes? Feanor has always been a character that I love to read about but fear touching personally, because he's got to be so complex and so deep. I like how you played it here, and made references to the past without ever having to tell the reader in some sort of explanatory narrative bit. Just little throwbacks - like the shaking would have looked like anger to those who knew him, or his mantra of stupid stupid.

Icecapades made me giggle, honestly. Well done, and just adorable. I didn't read the title the first time, and at first really wasn't sure what they were all "D:"ing about. *giggle*

And Weeping Willow... gyah. Beautiful and depressing. A nice little character study-esque piece, bitterly sweet.

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