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zhie ([personal profile] zhie) wrote2006-05-17 08:56 am

Part 4d & the end

Like, oh my God, I totally can't believe I finished this in less than a week.

And y'know what? The entire thing is about the exact same size as 'Silver and Gold' which took more than a year from point of conception to the finishing of it. Who knew... without further adieu..



In the beginning, Glorfindel would run his tongue one way, then take a look up at Erestor for his reaction. Little grunts and quiet moans greeted his ears. As he took more time attending to the solid muscle standing at attention before him, Glorfindel found he could make Erestor moan louder and longer, and that now and then when he did something particularly enjoyable, Erestor would thrust his hips up for more. When Glorfindel enveloped the entire head in his mouth, the dark ellon fell back onto the bed, mewling and arching his pelvis up in such a reckless manner that Glorfindel found he would need to hold Erestor’s thighs down in order to do what he liked.

“Think I can manage it all?” he asked in a husky tone before running his tongue from the root to the tip, flicking the weeping slit at the top. Erestor merely groaned in reply, straining to get closer despite being held down. His hands were tightly dug around the edged of the mattress and when he felt his erection slide into the warm, moist passage Glorfindel offered, he cried out his lover’s name in pure bliss.

Bobbing his head up and down, Glorfindel slowly released the organ from his mouth, swirling his tongue around the head before letting it go completely. “Like that, do you?” He reached for the small vial he had selected earlier while Erestor whimpered at the loss of contact. “I really do want to taste you,” he whispered, making his request known. His head bowed again after he rubbed the oil onto his hands, and as he took Erestor into his mouth once more he also slid a finger right into Erestor’s clenching entrance.

Erestor yowled in delight at the instant invasion, as whatever bit of pain he felt from the suddenness of it soon ebbed away in exchange for sensations that were absolutely wonderful. The width was doubled quickly as soon as Glorfindel felt Erestor pushing back, and he curved his fingers just as every book he had ever read had said to. All it took was a few well-placed strokes deep inside his lover for Glorfindel to feel the eruption down the back of his throat. He backed off just slightly, making good on his promise to actually taste Erestor as he swallowed the rest of his seed. “How are you feeling?” he crooned while bathing Erestor’s softening length with his tongue to capture the rest of his essence.

The fingers that were preparing him were still plunged deep inside, and Erestor gasped when they moved apart to stretch him further. “My legs are weak and I can see stars,” he said, only-half joking. “Take me now, Glorfindel, do not tease me. I want you.”

Giving only the slightest of nods, Glorfindel removed his fingers slowly, giving the spot that made Erestor wild with desire one final time as he retreated. Despite being a little wobbly on his legs, Erestor balanced himself upon his hands and knees, splaying his fingers for support.

Inside of mounting him immediately, Glorfindel took the time to run his hands over the smooth flesh before him. He kneaded the tight, twin globes raised up for his inspection, and passed his thumb over the puckered flesh in between, which caused Erestor to shiver and moan. The golden elf slid his hands along Erestor’s sides until he reached his shoulders, which he massaged while placing kisses along his lover’s neck and down his back until he found his destination once again.

By now, Erestor was hard once again, which was just what Glorfindel had been hoping for. Placing the head of his erection at the entryway, Glorfindel bit his bottom lip and gave a little push forward. Realizing that this was not merely Glorfindel’s fingers, Erestor took a deep breath, pulling a very surprised ellon halfway in on his own. “Oh, sweet Eru!” called out Glorfindel, and Erestor clenched his internal muscles as he coaxed Glorfindel to enter him all the way.

“Erestor- ughh- I do not want to- mmnnhh- hurt you-“

There came a frustrated mewing. “I need to feel you deep inside of me.”

Not one to disappoint, Glorfindel pressed forward, swallowing hard when he was engulfed to the hilt. It was so tight, and they were so close. He knew he would have to move soon, but for the moment, he savored the connection between them.

His thrusts were at first unsteady as he awkwardly tried to find a rhythm that suited them both. Erestor wanted something a bit harder and rougher than Glorfindel was first attempting, but they soon found a pace that was exciting and pleasing. With his hands holding Erestor’s hips firmly in place, Glorfindel drove in deep and released himself much sooner than he had intended to. He stayed buried until the twitches of his calming member ceased, and then managed to grab a cloth he had left on the night table which he held between them as they parted to catch the excess so as not to ruin the blankets.

Glorfindel whispered for Erestor to stay where he was, and returned after a moment with another cloth and a towel. The cloth was damp, and he cleaned off what remained before patting Erestor’s posterior dry. “Still hard...” remarked Glorfindel of Erestor’s erection.

“Yesss,” he hissed as elegant fingers gently touched him.

“Let me take care of that for you.” With Erestor still on all fours, Glorfindel laid down and scooted beneath his lover. He guided his lower half down to meet him, and slid his hand up Erestor’s chest, pressing him back. With his legs bent at either side of Glorfindel’s head, Erestor was engulfed once again by the heated mouth that teased him earlier.

This time, he took charge a bit more, digging his fingers into the golden mane while easing himself up and down. His eyes were closed, head thrown back, and the only word uttered from his lips was the name of his beloved tormentor who used his hands to steady him as his passion came forth once again. Erestor looked down as he panted, sated and spent, and for once, smiling after such an event. Glorfindel looked pleasantly pleased with himself as he lapped up the last droplets of cream from his lover’s body.

---

Sleep came all too easy for Glorfindel, and now he was snoring at the ceiling as was the usual scene and for many nights to come. Erestor, tucked loosely beside him, stared at the vague outline of the door in the darkness, contemplating the past year.

The first peeking ray of dim light filtered into the room, and Erestor rolled over and blinked at the hazy dawning of the day. The kitchen maids would soon be around to take orders for breakfast, and it was an opportunity Erestor could not pass up. Sneaking out of bed was easier than he had envisioned, and he crept to the door. A stack of parchment was on his desk and he quietly picked up his quill, dipped it into the inkwell, and scratched a note onto the sheet. Folding it in half, he slid it halfway beneath the door before settling himself back into bed.

---

When Glorfindel awoke, it was to the sight of Erestor, hovering directly over him. “Mmm... I think we should sleep in this morning.”

“I think we should skip work today altogether,” suggested Erestor, who was lounged atop Glorfindel. The cream-colored sheets separated their bodies, and Glorfindel blushed slightly when he realized he was somewhat aroused already. “I wrote a note to Elrond and he said it would be alright, considering you were gone for so long. Also considering, he has the Lorien party to see off today, and will not be in a mood to hold council.”

“I see,” nodded Glorfindel, the color receding from his cheeks. “I suppose we should head to breakfast,” he said, noting how bright the sun coming through the windows was, and hence, how late in the morning he had slept.

“No need.” Erestor shifted away for a moment, and brought back a large bowl that had been sitting on the table. “I already took care of that.”

“Oh?”

“Close your eyes.”

“Kiss me first.”

“How impatient.” Erestor inclined his head forward, giving in to his lover’s wish. “I suppose you do not intend to wait a full year to exchange these rings for bands of gold, either.”

“Not a chance. Speaking of which, are you free tomorrow evening?” asked Glorfindel, and Erestor could not tell if he was jesting or not.

Instead, Erestor smiled, and repeated, “Close your eyes.”

Glorfindel did as he was told, and he felt something cool gently probe at his mouth. Opening obligingly, something was placed inside. He smirked once Erestor’s fingers had retreated, and ate the delicious cream-covered fruit. “May I open my eyes now?”

“I have wanted to do this for months,” admitted Erestor. “It was these stupid sheets. I suppose the colors are growing on me now that they have given me such naughty ideas.” He fed Glorfindel another raspberry and then sighed playfully. “I suppose I will allow it.”

“Mmm... do I get to reciprocate?” Glorfindel asked after accepting a half dozen more berries.

“If you like,” answered Erestor, licking the cream from his fingers.

Glorfindel motioned for Erestor to sit up, and the two moved their breakfasting to one of the big chairs. With Erestor on Glorfindel’s lap, they were free to offer the fruits to one another, and when those were gone, to lap cream off of each other’s fingers until the bowl was clean. “I think,” said Glorfindel as he pulled Erestor a little closer until the slighter elf was straddling the golden one on the chair, “that we should have raspberries and cream every morning.”

“Every morning?” Erestor pouted a little. “But I have a few other ideas that I have come up with. Including one that involves...” Erestor lowered his head, giving Glorfindel a sensual look, “chocolate...”

Glorfindel gulped, having a feeling that although they had just finished breakfast, that there would be more cream very soon. “Remind me never to change those sheets,” he said as he was brought back to the bed by the sly little elf with the cheeky grin.

-END-


I will be loading it in entirety onto pounce! soon.

[identity profile] aglarien1.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful ending, Zhie! Erestor deserves to be finally happy - and so does Glorfindel.
*smooches*

[identity profile] mdarkdreamer.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Alright...you get 2 smores for that chap! *Drool*

Tho the rest of the smores remaine mine untill you get another chap of the other story out!

*Yes, Im greedy*

~DarkDreamer

[identity profile] angelfire74.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute my friend cute... Ok I have never had anyone feed me. (except as a baby but that does not count).. I think that is one more thing to add to my list.

[identity profile] erynlinia.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
YES!!!
How deliciously hot and sweet! Erestor's happy, Glorfy's happy and the readers are happy!!
Woo-hoo!!

**huggles**

[identity profile] nienna-weeper.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*phew*

Okay, I all better now.

*hands Zhie a chocolate chip cookie*
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[personal profile] elirielliri 2006-05-17 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh,this is so sweet and loving.Wonderful way to finish this fic.They are so happy and I loved that chocolate idea....LOL
(((((((hugs Zhie ))))))))))

[identity profile] erviniae.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
sighs..happily...sweet, and hot...