yoinked from samtyr

[zhie]

Pick any passage of up to 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written, and stick that selection in a comment. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place.

And yes, btw, the last 'tell me to do this' where the suggestion was five times Gildor and Glorfindel almost kissed and one time they did? I'm working on it; it's more than three sentences; I didn't forget. XD